, age How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? She felt nicer and happy. 's Comments: We will get into so much trouble.
, age
How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings?
She felt nicer and happy.
's Comments:
We will get into so much trouble.
julia, age 8 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? I don't know How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? she felt nicer and happy julia's Comments: well I never thought she would get to so much trouble
julia, age 8
Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown?
I don't know
she felt nicer and happy
julia's Comments:
well I never thought she would get to so much trouble
, age Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? she is ugly How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? fetching water 's Comments: he is so happy
she is ugly
fetching water
he is so happy
, age 's Comments: COOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SWEET!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
COOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SWEET!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Samantha, age 11 Samantha's Comments: I thought it was a cool story and i really liked it!!!!! If only I can act it out now....O love it hopefully everybody does too.
Samantha, age 11
Samantha's Comments:
I thought it was a cool story and i really liked it!!!!! If only I can act it out now....O love it hopefully everybody does too.
Princess, age 11 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? BECAUSE SHE WANTED TO HELP QUEEN. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? DON'T KNOW. Princess's Comments: IT WAS AWESOME.
Princess, age 11
BECAUSE SHE WANTED TO HELP QUEEN.
DON'T KNOW.
Princess's Comments:
IT WAS AWESOME.
MAGGIE, age 11 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? BECAUSE SHE WANTED TO HELP THE QUEEN. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? BY MAKEING HER FEEL GOOD. MAGGIE's Comments: I THOUGHT IT WAS A NICE STORY
MAGGIE, age 11
BECAUSE SHE WANTED TO HELP THE QUEEN.
BY MAKEING HER FEEL GOOD.
MAGGIE's Comments:
I THOUGHT IT WAS A NICE STORY
, age 's Comments: Boring but ok.
Boring but ok.
Swathy, age 11 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? Because the girl thought that if she help the queen who has magical powers,the queen will also help her change back to her human form . How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? When the girl took troubles to get the crown from the giant,she thought of her mother who worked so hard and this is what helping the queen change the girls feelings . Swathy's Comments: I liked this story very much and I would like to read this story again and again.
Swathy, age 11
Because the girl thought that if she help the queen who has magical powers,the queen will also help her change back to her human form .
When the girl took troubles to get the crown from the giant,she thought of her mother who worked so hard and this is what helping the queen change the girls feelings .
Swathy's Comments:
I liked this story very much and I would like to read this story again and again.
Victoria, age 10 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? She was lazy and didn't think. So she did everyhing complicatedly. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? She thought of how her mother must feel and felt terribly bad. Victoria's Comments: I love it i love it so much i got my neighborhood friends to perform with me!It`s been ssssssssssssssooooooooooo much fun!
Victoria, age 10
She was lazy and didn't think. So she did everyhing complicatedly.
She thought of how her mother must feel and felt terribly bad.
Victoria's Comments:
I love it i love it so much i got my neighborhood friends to perform with me!It`s been ssssssssssssssooooooooooo much fun!
koralys, age 13 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? So she can be human again. She wanted to be her old self again and she said she would do anything to be herself again. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? She understood the queen's problem and wanted to help. koralys's Comments: I thought this story was cool and enjoyable.
koralys, age 13
So she can be human again. She wanted to be her old self again and she said she would do anything to be herself again.
She understood the queen's problem and wanted to help.
koralys's Comments:
I thought this story was cool and enjoyable.
sAraH mae, age 13 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? bEcAusE shE wAnt to hELp tHe qUeen . . How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? shE aLrEAdy kNows thAt hELpiNg oThers tHats a big rEjOicE of uR sELf .. sAraH mae's Comments: iTs sO vERy iNtereSting..
sAraH mae, age 13
bEcAusE shE wAnt to hELp tHe qUeen . .
shE aLrEAdy kNows thAt hELpiNg oThers tHats a big rEjOicE of uR sELf ..
sAraH mae's Comments:
iTs sO vERy iNtereSting..
pingo, age 1234 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? Hello How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? Good-bye. pingo's Comments: I thought that it was awesome.
pingo, age 1234
Hello
Good-bye.
pingo's Comments:
I thought that it was awesome.
aysha, age 10 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? So she could become human again and stay by her parents. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? It showed her that if you work you will get rewards. aysha's Comments: It was good and people would learn a lot from this story and I'm sure they will know what the moral is.
aysha, age 10
So she could become human again and stay by her parents.
It showed her that if you work you will get rewards.
aysha's Comments:
It was good and people would learn a lot from this story and I'm sure they will know what the moral is.
Erica, age 11 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? So she could become human again. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? I showed her that if you work you will get rewards. Erica's Comments: It was good but not great.
Erica, age 11
So she could become human again.
I showed her that if you work you will get rewards.
Erica's Comments:
It was good but not great.
Alana, age 9 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? Because she wanted it. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? By being nice. Alana's Comments: It was brilliant.
Alana, age 9
Because she wanted it.
By being nice.
Alana's Comments:
It was brilliant.
fernando, age 6 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? Beacause they wanted to return to life as humans again. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? The girl was happy to help the queen. fernando's Comments: I think this was a good story, it is a fairytale.
fernando, age 6
Beacause they wanted to return to life as humans again.
The girl was happy to help the queen.
fernando's Comments:
I think this was a good story, it is a fairytale.
pam, age 9 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? To become a child again. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? She knew that work was a good thing. pam's Comments: I want to help my mom and dad more. It was happy, yet sad.
pam, age 9
To become a child again.
She knew that work was a good thing.
pam's Comments:
I want to help my mom and dad more. It was happy, yet sad.
Sharlene, age 7 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? She wanted to turn back into a real person. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? She is very helpful. Sharlene's Comments: At first I thought the story would be difficult.
Sharlene, age 7
She wanted to turn back into a real person.
She is very helpful.
Sharlene's Comments:
At first I thought the story would be difficult.
Kashawn, age 10 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? She could not see. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? She started liking her. Kashawn's Comments: It was long.
Kashawn, age 10
She could not see.
She started liking her.
Kashawn's Comments:
It was long.
Breonna, age 8 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? Because it was falling. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? By making the queen feel happy. Breonna's Comments: I think he felt happy.
Breonna, age 8
Because it was falling.
By making the queen feel happy.
Breonna's Comments:
I think he felt happy.
BOBBI, age 15 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? TO TURN BACK INTO HUMAN How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? SHE REALIZED BEING A ANIMAL HELPED HER IN MENY WAYS BOBBI's Comments: I THINK THAT IS WAS OK FOR A KID WRITING IT
BOBBI, age 15
TO TURN BACK INTO HUMAN
SHE REALIZED BEING A ANIMAL HELPED HER IN MENY WAYS
BOBBI's Comments:
I THINK THAT IS WAS OK FOR A KID WRITING IT
demi, age 10 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? She wants money like all the women.
demi, age 10
She wants money like all the women.
, age 's Comments: I think the story is very nice to read. From:Dini,3 Pluto
I think the story is very nice to read. From:Dini,3 Pluto
l, age 1 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? So she could change back. l's Comments: It was long.
l, age 1
So she could change back.
l's Comments:
Autumn, age 10 Autumn's Comments: The story was great. I loved it when the fish told her, "not her," but the girl did and the girl is just like me.
Autumn, age 10
Autumn's Comments:
The story was great. I loved it when the fish told her, "not her," but the girl did and the girl is just like me.
Autumn, age 10 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? She wanted all the money in the world and she wanted to be a maiden. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? She was being nice to her and she made her feel at home which made her feel great. Autumn's Comments: The story was great.
She wanted all the money in the world and she wanted to be a maiden.
She was being nice to her and she made her feel at home which made her feel great.
The story was great.
George, age 14 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? She wanted the money like all women.
George, age 14
She wanted the money like all women.
, age Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? To be a maiden again. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? By doing service. 's Comments: great!
To be a maiden again.
By doing service.
great!
maham, age 10 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? She ran into a lot of trouble because she could turn back to normal with the queen and other fish. She would go back to her family. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? She was back to normal. She could go back to her family. She could live her life again. maham's Comments: I thought it was exciting and adventurous. That a girl who's very selfish learns a lesson on working hard.
maham, age 10
She ran into a lot of trouble because she could turn back to normal with the queen and other fish. She would go back to her family.
She was back to normal. She could go back to her family. She could live her life again.
maham's Comments:
I thought it was exciting and adventurous. That a girl who's very selfish learns a lesson on working hard.
Hannah, age 9 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? Because she wanted to experience the feeling of kindness. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? She became very happy because she had done the queen a good turn. Hannah's Comments: It was exellent.
Hannah, age 9
Because she wanted to experience the feeling of kindness.
She became very happy because she had done the queen a good turn.
Hannah's Comments:
It was exellent.
Zulfa, age 7 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? Because she alwaays turned into an animal. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? Because the prince didn't know his mother, the queen, had met the girl and turned the girl into all sorts of animals.
Zulfa, age 7
Because she alwaays turned into an animal.
Because the prince didn't know his mother, the queen, had met the girl and turned the girl into all sorts of animals.
fraty, age 120 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? Because she felt like it. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? By being nice. fraty's Comments: It was ok.
fraty, age 120
Because she felt like it.
fraty's Comments:
It was ok.
san, age 14 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? Because she wanted to be in the human form again. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? Because the girl knew that there's no way she can change into a human again except by helping the queen get her crown back and she also knew that her action will save both, she and the queen. san's Comments: Really nice and wonderful!
san, age 14
Because she wanted to be in the human form again.
Because the girl knew that there's no way she can change into a human again except by helping the queen get her crown back and she also knew that her action will save both, she and the queen.
san's Comments:
Really nice and wonderful!
jess, age 8 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? Because she wanted to help the queen. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? It changed her feelings by turning her into human. jess's Comments: It was a brillant story I think you should make more.
jess, age 8
Because she wanted to help the queen.
It changed her feelings by turning her into human.
jess's Comments:
It was a brillant story I think you should make more.
grace, age 13 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? Because she wanted to. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? It made her understand the king better. grace's Comments: I thought that it was extraordinary.
grace, age 13
Because she wanted to.
It made her understand the king better.
grace's Comments:
I thought that it was extraordinary.
Haley, age 9 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? So she could help the queen. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? To help others when thay need help and to not be selfish. Haley's Comments: It was a good lesson.
Haley, age 9
So she could help the queen.
To help others when thay need help and to not be selfish.
Haley's Comments:
It was a good lesson.
Kimberly, age 11 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? Because she wanted to be a person again. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? The queen helped by making the girl be more helpful. Kimberly's Comments: It was nice!
Kimberly, age 11
Because she wanted to be a person again.
The queen helped by making the girl be more helpful.
Kimberly's Comments:
It was nice!
melissa, age 7 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? Because she wanted to be on earth again. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? Because it made her feel good to help the queen. melissa's Comments: It was great, I liked it a lot.
melissa, age 7
Because she wanted to be on earth again.
Because it made her feel good to help the queen.
melissa's Comments:
It was great, I liked it a lot.
Ann, age 30 Ann's Comments: It was wonderful. I loved it and so did my kids.
Ann, age 30
Ann's Comments:
It was wonderful. I loved it and so did my kids.
May, age 12 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? Because she cared. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? She learned to help other people. May's Comments: I enjoyed it and it inspired me a lot!!
May, age 12
Because she cared.
She learned to help other people.
May's Comments:
I enjoyed it and it inspired me a lot!!
katie, age 4 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? Because she cared and loved her. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? She learned to not hate people~ and love them. katie's Comments: I liked it and I loved it.
katie, age 4
Because she cared and loved her.
She learned to not hate people~ and love them.
katie's Comments:
I liked it and I loved it.
Kristen, age 13 Kristen's Comments: I thought the story was really good, and I recomend it to people of all ages, and I got my friends to read it and they all loved it.
Kristen, age 13
Kristen's Comments:
I thought the story was really good, and I recomend it to people of all ages, and I got my friends to read it and they all loved it.
Kimberly, age 13 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? The girl went through so much trouble to find the queen's crown because she did not want to be a fish any longer. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? She was more caring and wanted to do nice things. Kimberly's Comments: I thought it was a weird story because humans do not turn into fishes. Other than that it was a good story.
Kimberly, age 13
The girl went through so much trouble to find the queen's crown because she did not want to be a fish any longer.
She was more caring and wanted to do nice things.
I thought it was a weird story because humans do not turn into fishes. Other than that it was a good story.
Lehia, age Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? She wanted to turn back into real person. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? She is more helpful. Lehia's Comments: It was fantastic but I would have enjoyed it more if it wasn't twenty pages long ha ha.
Lehia, age
She wanted to turn back into real person.
She is more helpful.
Lehia's Comments:
It was fantastic but I would have enjoyed it more if it wasn't twenty pages long ha ha.
Jennifer, age 11 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? The girl did that to show that she was a honest person. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? The Queen gave the girl some gold and she was glad to get gold. Jennifer's Comments: This story was nothing but written words to try to make a story. It was horrible.
Jennifer, age 11
The girl did that to show that she was a honest person.
The Queen gave the girl some gold and she was glad to get gold.
Jennifer's Comments:
This story was nothing but written words to try to make a story. It was horrible.
, age 's Comments: It was a great story! I didn't get to finish it though. Kelly S.
It was a great story! I didn't get to finish it though. Kelly S.
sophie, age 9 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? Because she wanted to help. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? It made her realize being selfish is bad. sophie's Comments: GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
sophie, age 9
Because she wanted to help.
It made her realize being selfish is bad.
sophie's Comments:
GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Kylie, age 14 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? She had a good heart and she new it was the right thing to do. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? She used to be selfish and lazy but when she helped the queen she found that working hard pays off. Kylie's Comments: It was fun to read and it was a really good story.
Kylie, age 14
She had a good heart and she new it was the right thing to do.
She used to be selfish and lazy but when she helped the queen she found that working hard pays off.
Kylie's Comments:
It was fun to read and it was a really good story.
Leah, age 7 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? Because she could not find anything else. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? She had thought about what happened. Leah's Comments: I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Leah, age 7
Because she could not find anything else.
She had thought about what happened.
Leah's Comments:
I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
jade, age 11 jade's Comments: i think that the story is fun for young persons because it is short and easy to understand.
jade, age 11
jade's Comments:
i think that the story is fun for young persons because it is short and easy to understand.
, age Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? So she could be queen. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? By telling her good stuff. 's Comments: I thought it was really good, it was excellent.
So she could be queen.
By telling her good stuff.
I thought it was really good, it was excellent.
Sierra, age 8 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? Beacause she wanted to prove to herself that she could be trustworthy and reliable. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? It changed her feelings because she knew she could be very proud of herself for the things she had done. Sierra's Comments: My sister and I thought it was a very, very good story.
Sierra, age 8
Beacause she wanted to prove to herself that she could be trustworthy and reliable.
It changed her feelings because she knew she could be very proud of herself for the things she had done.
Sierra's Comments:
My sister and I thought it was a very, very good story.
samantha, age 10 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? She did it because she wanted to return to normal so dearly that she'd do anything at the moment. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? It changed them because she realized that she needed help and being spoiled and rotten wouldn't help. samantha's Comments: I thought the story was cute and touching!
samantha, age 10
She did it because she wanted to return to normal so dearly that she'd do anything at the moment.
It changed them because she realized that she needed help and being spoiled and rotten wouldn't help.
samantha's Comments:
I thought the story was cute and touching!
samantha muniz, age 10 samantha muniz's Comments: I like fish! And I like this story! Cool!
samantha muniz, age 10
samantha muniz's Comments:
I like fish! And I like this story! Cool!
Amy, age 15 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? Becasue she wanted to be human again. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? She wanted to do something for someone else and she was much nicer. Amy's Comments: It was a good story but just a bit long.
Amy, age 15
Becasue she wanted to be human again.
She wanted to do something for someone else and she was much nicer.
Amy's Comments:
It was a good story but just a bit long.
, age 's Comments: Hi, my name is Manny of Baguio City, Philippines. I'm glad I discovered your website. Since several months ago, I had been coming back forth to your website to read your stories and sometimes print out the pictures. You see, I tell them to my children
Hi, my name is Manny of Baguio City, Philippines. I'm glad I discovered your website. Since several months ago, I had been coming back forth to your website to read your stories and sometimes print out the pictures. You see, I tell them to my children
Phoebe, age 14 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? To become a girl again. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? By making her more responsible. Phoebe's Comments: I thought the story was great and well written.
Phoebe, age 14
To become a girl again.
By making her more responsible.
Phoebe's Comments:
I thought the story was great and well written.
Narissa, age 10 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? Because she wanted to become a human again. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? She felt happy. Narissa's Comments: I thought it was fantastic. We are pearforming the play at my school!
Narissa, age 10
Because she wanted to become a human again.
She felt happy.
Narissa's Comments:
I thought it was fantastic. We are pearforming the play at my school!
STEPHANIE, age 17 STEPHANIE's Comments: I THINK YOU SHOULD TRY THESE BOOKS IN SPANISH.
STEPHANIE, age 17
STEPHANIE's Comments:
I THINK YOU SHOULD TRY THESE BOOKS IN SPANISH.
julia, age 8 years Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? She wanted to help. julia's Comments: Great.
julia, age 8 years
She wanted to help.
Great.
christela, age 12 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? She wanted her to be helpful. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? So she can go to earth again. christela's Comments: That was beautiful story. I never read a story like this story. This story was the best story that I have ever read before. I want to read it like 200000 times because it's a good story. I really love it.
christela, age 12
She wanted her to be helpful.
So she can go to earth again.
christela's Comments:
That was beautiful story. I never read a story like this story. This story was the best story that I have ever read before. I want to read it like 200000 times because it's a good story. I really love it.
christela, age 12 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? She wanted her to be helpful. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? So she can go to earth again. christela's Comments: That was a beautiful story. I never read a story like this story. This story was the best story that I ever read before. I want to read it like 200000 times because it's a good story. I really love it.
That was a beautiful story. I never read a story like this story. This story was the best story that I ever read before. I want to read it like 200000 times because it's a good story. I really love it.
erin, age 11 erin's Comments: HEY! Whootie Owl! I loved it, it was great! Can you show me your favorite story?
erin, age 11
erin's Comments:
HEY! Whootie Owl! I loved it, it was great! Can you show me your favorite story?
julia, age 8 years Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? She wanted to be a girl again. julia's Comments: I liked it a lot.
She wanted to be a girl again.
I liked it a lot.
Bavani, age 11 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? She did that to turn back into a girl. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? It turned the girl into a well-behaved and helpful child. Bavani's Comments: It was very nice. I enjoyed it. I hope I could read more stories.
Bavani, age 11
She did that to turn back into a girl.
It turned the girl into a well-behaved and helpful child.
Bavani's Comments:
It was very nice. I enjoyed it. I hope I could read more stories.
julia, age 7 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? She wanted to be a girl again. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? Because at last she was helpful. julia's Comments: Great.
julia, age 7
Because at last she was helpful.
jazza, age 11 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? So she would come back to earth to be a normal girl again. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? It changed the girl's feelings because she was allowed back up to earth. jazza's Comments: i thought the story was great. I think it was a great story and very enjoyable.
jazza, age 11
So she would come back to earth to be a normal girl again.
It changed the girl's feelings because she was allowed back up to earth.
jazza's Comments:
i thought the story was great. I think it was a great story and very enjoyable.
, age 's Comments: Great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
yianna, age 13 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? Bbecause she wasn't responsible enough.. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? The queen inspired her. yianna's Comments: The story was tooo long!!!!!
yianna, age 13
Bbecause she wasn't responsible enough..
The queen inspired her.
yianna's Comments:
The story was tooo long!!!!!
savannah, age 10 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? Because she could not find it. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? It made her feelings turn good. savannah's Comments: Whootie, I really liked your story.
savannah, age 10
Because she could not find it.
It made her feelings turn good.
savannah's Comments:
Whootie, I really liked your story.
Cesar, age 13 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? She got in big trouble because she can`t be turned into a human so she needs to act like an animal and she found it difficult. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? Well, they changed because the girl tried to help the queen to return to a human so she would be happy. Cesar's Comments: It`s interesting because thought you a lot and at the same time is funny ....
Cesar, age 13
She got in big trouble because she can`t be turned into a human so she needs to act like an animal and she found it difficult.
Well, they changed because the girl tried to help the queen to return to a human so she would be happy.
Cesar's Comments:
It`s interesting because thought you a lot and at the same time is funny ....
Kevin, age 12 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? The girl went to such trouble to recover the quenn's crown because the queen promised that if the girl got the queen her crown then the girl would be transformed back to her human self. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? Helping the queen changed the girl's feelings because now she knows that all good things come to you if you work for it. You just can't lay about hoping for for some miracle to happen. Kevin's Comments: What I thought about the story was that it teaches kids to work for things. In life you need to work for the things that you want. It's a good idea to teach kids at a young age.
Kevin, age 12
The girl went to such trouble to recover the quenn's crown because the queen promised that if the girl got the queen her crown then the girl would be transformed back to her human self.
Helping the queen changed the girl's feelings because now she knows that all good things come to you if you work for it. You just can't lay about hoping for for some miracle to happen.
Kevin's Comments:
What I thought about the story was that it teaches kids to work for things. In life you need to work for the things that you want. It's a good idea to teach kids at a young age.
savannah, age 10 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? I do not know. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? Happier. savannah's Comments: I liked the story, Whootie.
I do not know.
Happier.
I liked the story, Whootie.
savannah bowman, age 110 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? I do not know. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? Good. savannah bowman's Comments: I liked it because THE GIRI GOT NICE AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
savannah bowman, age 110
Good.
savannah bowman's Comments:
I liked it because THE GIRI GOT NICE AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
amanda, age 9 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? SHE HAD A LOT OF TROUBLE. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? BE A NEW PERSON. amanda's Comments: I LIKED THE STORY A LOT.
amanda, age 9
SHE HAD A LOT OF TROUBLE.
BE A NEW PERSON.
amanda's Comments:
I LIKED THE STORY A LOT.
Maggie, age 11 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? She wanted to become a girl again. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? She realized that she was being selfish and that these girls had suffered much longer than she had as a fish. Maggie's Comments: Whootie Owl, I like this story! It sends a message to not be so selfish and to think about others, too.
Maggie, age 11
She wanted to become a girl again.
She realized that she was being selfish and that these girls had suffered much longer than she had as a fish.
Maggie's Comments:
Whootie Owl, I like this story! It sends a message to not be so selfish and to think about others, too.
Ana, age 11 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? She went through so much trouble to get the crown because she wanted her own body back, wanted the queen & others to be happy. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? Helping the queen made her not selfish anymore and made her realize that helping can make a difference in her life. Ana's Comments: I thought it was a very inspirational story and can make someone realize that they are not the only person in this world. I think helping someone could help you. Also if you think someone's having a bad day then smile at them. Smiles are contagious. S
Ana, age 11
She went through so much trouble to get the crown because she wanted her own body back, wanted the queen & others to be happy.
Helping the queen made her not selfish anymore and made her realize that helping can make a difference in her life.
Ana's Comments:
I thought it was a very inspirational story and can make someone realize that they are not the only person in this world. I think helping someone could help you. Also if you think someone's having a bad day then smile at them. Smiles are contagious. S
, age Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? She had to go under the water to get the crown. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? The mermaid wanted to be the queen and marry the King. 's Comments: I think that the story was great. It is a little funny but next time you might want to make a really, really funny one so that the kids will just laugh their heads off because it is so funny. I think you can make really gunny stories.
She had to go under the water to get the crown.
The mermaid wanted to be the queen and marry the King.
I think that the story was great. It is a little funny but next time you might want to make a really, really funny one so that the kids will just laugh their heads off because it is so funny. I think you can make really gunny stories.
victoria, age 11 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? She had to go under the water to get the queen's crown. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? The girl wanted to get married and have kids, so she married the Prince. victoria's Comments: I think the story is cool and imaginative. It was also funny. Are you going to do any more stories?
victoria, age 11
She had to go under the water to get the queen's crown.
The girl wanted to get married and have kids, so she married the Prince.
victoria's Comments:
I think the story is cool and imaginative. It was also funny. Are you going to do any more stories?
Sarah, age 10 Sarah's Comments: I enjoyed reading the story but I thought pictures were brilliant.
Sarah, age 10
Sarah's Comments:
I enjoyed reading the story but I thought pictures were brilliant.
Grace, age 9 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? So she can be a human again. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? She wanted to be queen again. Grace's Comments: It was really good, please can you make some more things for 9-10 year olds.
Grace, age 9
So she can be a human again.
She wanted to be queen again.
Grace's Comments:
It was really good, please can you make some more things for 9-10 year olds.
T'keyah Nelms, age 10 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? She had many things to explore and many things to go against. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? It made her more greatful and made her feel loved. T'keyah Nelms's Comments: This is my second time reading this so I'm just going to say it's okay. Mr.Whootie Owl,Can you make a more exciting website for (10-15)year olds? We think we are to big for this!!!!!!!!!!
T'keyah Nelms, age 10
She had many things to explore and many things to go against.
It made her more greatful and made her feel loved.
T'keyah Nelms's Comments:
This is my second time reading this so I'm just going to say it's okay. Mr.Whootie Owl,Can you make a more exciting website for (10-15)year olds? We think we are to big for this!!!!!!!!!!
Jewelian, age 10 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? To help her. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? By making her happy. Jewelian's Comments: I was interested in the story. I read it everyday after I finish my homework. Thanks, Whootie, that was the best story I have ever read. Sincerly, Jewelian [Julian]
Jewelian, age 10
To help her.
By making her happy.
Jewelian's Comments:
I was interested in the story. I read it everyday after I finish my homework. Thanks, Whootie, that was the best story I have ever read. Sincerly, Jewelian [Julian]
, age old 's Comments: Whootie, your story is wonderful. Matilde
, age old
Whootie, your story is wonderful. Matilde
jawanna, age 10 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? So she could turn back to a human. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? Because she told her about her son. jawanna's Comments: I think the story was fine- why? because it was sad.
jawanna, age 10
So she could turn back to a human.
Because she told her about her son.
jawanna's Comments:
I think the story was fine- why? because it was sad.
Ashley, age 11 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? The girl probably thought the queen would turn her back into a woman again. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? It helped her change her attitude, and she started to be kind instead of cruel. Ashley's Comments: I thought the story was a great magical story.
Ashley, age 11
The girl probably thought the queen would turn her back into a woman again.
It helped her change her attitude, and she started to be kind instead of cruel.
Ashley's Comments:
I thought the story was a great magical story.
Makaia, age 15 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? 'Cuz she wanted to turn back into a human. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? She decided that it wouldn't kill her to actually help out for once. Makaia's Comments: I thought that this story was cool.
Makaia, age 15
'Cuz she wanted to turn back into a human.
She decided that it wouldn't kill her to actually help out for once.
Makaia's Comments:
I thought that this story was cool.
Daniella, age 11 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? The girl wanted to become human again and would give anything to do so. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? I think it was because she learned her lesson that if she listened to people, life would be better. Daniella's Comments: I think it was a very good story and it teaches you a good lesson.
Daniella, age 11
The girl wanted to become human again and would give anything to do so.
I think it was because she learned her lesson that if she listened to people, life would be better.
Daniella's Comments:
I think it was a very good story and it teaches you a good lesson.
Ben, age 9 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? So she could return to normal. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? Becaouse she was changed back to normal. Ben's Comments: It was cool and exciting.
Ben, age 9
So she could return to normal.
Becaouse she was changed back to normal.
Ben's Comments:
It was cool and exciting.
marki, age 10 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? So she could back on earth. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? She felt happy. marki's Comments: It was great.
marki, age 10
So she could back on earth.
marki's Comments:
It was great.
corey, age 9 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? So she could back on earth. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? She felt happy. corey's Comments: It was great.
corey, age 9
corey's Comments:
Quentin, age 9 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? Give the green star and blue stone. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? She felt happy. Quentin's Comments: It was great.
Quentin, age 9
Give the green star and blue stone.
Quentin's Comments:
megan, age 9 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? So she could be a girl again. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? She wanted to do good things. megan's Comments: I liked the story a lot.
megan, age 9
So she could be a girl again.
She wanted to do good things.
megan's Comments:
I liked the story a lot.
Ben, age 9 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? So she could return to normal. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? Because she was changed back to normal. Ben's Comments: It was cool and exciting.
Because she was changed back to normal.
kass, age 9 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? So the queen could be human. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? She was happy because she helped the queen. kass's Comments: I liked it a lot!
kass, age 9
So the queen could be human.
She was happy because she helped the queen.
kass's Comments:
I liked it a lot!
Katelyn, age 9 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? So the queen would turn them back to humans.
Katelyn, age 9
So the queen would turn them back to humans.
Victor, age 9 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? Because the giant made the girl do some things. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? When the queen changed the girl back to a human. Victor's Comments: The story was great.
Victor, age 9
Because the giant made the girl do some things.
When the queen changed the girl back to a human.
Victor's Comments:
Seth, age 9 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? Because the giant had her to do three thing that are hardly possible. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? She felt like she did something important. Seth's Comments: The story was good.
Seth, age 9
Because the giant had her to do three thing that are hardly possible.
She felt like she did something important.
Seth's Comments:
The story was good.
Tyler, age Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? So she could be a girl again. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? She did good things. Tyler's Comments: I liked it.
Tyler, age
She did good things.
Tyler's Comments:
I liked it.
zac, age 8 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? So the queen can be human. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? Because it made her happy. zac's Comments: I thought the story was good.
zac, age 8
So the queen can be human.
Because it made her happy.
zac's Comments:
I thought the story was good.
Brittiny, age 10 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? Because the giant had her to do three things that are hardly possible. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? She felt like she did somthing important. Brittiny's Comments: It was great.
Brittiny, age 10
Because the giant had her to do three things that are hardly possible.
She felt like she did somthing important.
Brittiny's Comments:
Hannah, age 9 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? So she could turn back to a girl. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? She is going turn back to a girl. Hannah's Comments: It was a nice story.
So she could turn back to a girl.
She is going turn back to a girl.
It was a nice story.
Jordan, age 9 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? So she could be a queen again. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? Because if the girl did not, she would never be a person again.
Jordan, age 9
So she could be a queen again.
Because if the girl did not, she would never be a person again.
justin, age 09 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? So she could be queen again. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? Helping the queen made her feelings happy. justin's Comments: I liked the story and it was prety good.
justin, age 09
So she could be queen again.
Helping the queen made her feelings happy.
justin's Comments:
I liked the story and it was prety good.
Leah, age 9 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? Because she didn't listen. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? By caring about other people. Leah's Comments: I thought it was good!
Leah, age 9
Because she didn't listen.
By caring about other people.
I thought it was good!
Donovan, age 9 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? So she could regain her form.
Donovan, age 9
So she could regain her form.
Luke, age 9 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? So the queen would turn them back to peole. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? Because if the girl got the crown, the princess would turn them back.
Luke, age 9
So the queen would turn them back to peole.
Because if the girl got the crown, the princess would turn them back.
ting+shih, age 11 and 9 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? Because every place is different.
ting+shih, age 11 and 9
Because every place is different.
ting+shih, age 11 and 9 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? The giant wanted something to exchange and it is a collar of blue stones and a bag of stars. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? The girl did not help her parents or anything and this time she did something for people that they really needed. ting+shih's Comments: I think that this story is cool and exciting and interesting. I LIKED IT VERY MUCH AND I'D LIKE TO SAY SOMETHING TO THE AUTHOR. YOU ARE FANTASTIC
The giant wanted something to exchange and it is a collar of blue stones and a bag of stars.
The girl did not help her parents or anything and this time she did something for people that they really needed.
ting+shih's Comments:
I think that this story is cool and exciting and interesting. I LIKED IT VERY MUCH AND I'D LIKE TO SAY SOMETHING TO THE AUTHOR. YOU ARE FANTASTIC
Nicky, age 9 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? So she can become human again. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? She knew that the Queen cared. Nicky's Comments: I think it sounded real.
Nicky, age 9
So she can become human again.
She knew that the Queen cared.
Nicky's Comments:
I think it sounded real.
Rachel, age 9 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? So she could be a girl again. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? She learned to be more kind and respectful. Rachel's Comments: I absolutely loved that story.
Rachel, age 9
She learned to be more kind and respectful.
Rachel's Comments:
I absolutely loved that story.
Colter, age 8 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? So she could be human. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? She got to be human and so did the Queen. Colter's Comments: It was exciting.
Colter, age 8
So she could be human.
She got to be human and so did the Queen.
Colter's Comments:
It was exciting.
Adam, age 9 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? She wanted to be human again. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? Sad to happy. Adam's Comments: I thought it was cool. I loved it.
Adam, age 9
She wanted to be human again.
Sad to happy.
Adam's Comments:
I thought it was cool. I loved it.
oryan, age 10 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? So she can be a human again. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? She wanted to be a queen again. oryan's Comments: It was pretty neat story.
oryan, age 10
She wanted to be a queen again.
oryan's Comments:
It was pretty neat story.
oryan, age 10 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? So she can be a human again. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? She wanted to be a queen again. oryan's Comments: It was a pretty neat story.
It was a pretty neat story.
Dustin, age 9 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? She wanted to be a human again. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? She felt tired. Dustin's Comments: I liked it.
Dustin, age 9
She wanted to be a human again.
She felt tired.
Dustin's Comments:
katie, age 9 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? Because she had to do favors for the giant. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? If she got the crown, she would be turned back into a girl. katie's Comments: The story was touching.
katie, age 9
Because she had to do favors for the giant.
If she got the crown, she would be turned back into a girl.
The story was touching.
Ariel, age 10 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? So she could be a person again. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? Because she was selfish at the beginning of the story. Ariel's Comments: I thought it was good.
Ariel, age 10
So she could be a person again.
Because she was selfish at the beginning of the story.
Ariel's Comments:
I thought it was good.
Maleah, age 9 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? So that she could be a girl again. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? She learned to be nice to people. Maleah's Comments: I thought it was pretty cool because she changed into all of the animals.
Maleah, age 9
So that she could be a girl again.
She learned to be nice to people.
Maleah's Comments:
I thought it was pretty cool because she changed into all of the animals.
Esmeralda, age 9 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? So she could turn into a girl again. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? She was thankful. Esmeralda's Comments: It was cool.
Esmeralda, age 9
So she could turn into a girl again.
She was thankful.
Esmeralda's Comments:
It was cool.
Andrew, age 10 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? Because she had to be everything she was. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? The queen said that if she did the stuff, she could turn back. Andrew's Comments: Good.
Andrew, age 10
Because she had to be everything she was.
The queen said that if she did the stuff, she could turn back.
Andrew's Comments:
Taylor, age 9 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? So she could be a person again. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? Because she was selfesh at the first of the story, but she learned how to help out. Taylor's Comments: I liked it a lot.
Taylor, age 9
Because she was selfesh at the first of the story, but she learned how to help out.
Taylor's Comments:
joshua, age 9 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? So she could back into a girl. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? She was thankful. joshua's Comments: It was grateful.
joshua, age 9
So she could back into a girl.
joshua's Comments:
It was grateful.
Ashley, age 9 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? So she could turn back into a girl again. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? She was thankful. Ashley's Comments: It was awesome.
Ashley, age 9
So she could turn back into a girl again.
It was awesome.
carley, age 8 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? She wanted to be a girl again. carley's Comments: I liked the story.
carley, age 8
carley's Comments:
I liked the story.
Tim, age 9 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? He did not know what animals to choose. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? The girl has power. Tim's Comments: Good.
Tim, age 9
He did not know what animals to choose.
The girl has power.
Tim's Comments:
tyler lyon, age 9 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? So she could be a girl again. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? Because the queen told her the story of her being a princess. tyler lyon's Comments: I liked the story.
tyler lyon, age 9
Because the queen told her the story of her being a princess.
tyler lyon's Comments:
kl ch, age 18 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? So she could be a girl again. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? IT MADE HER FEEL GREAT. kl ch's Comments: It was GREAT.
kl ch, age 18
IT MADE HER FEEL GREAT.
kl ch's Comments:
It was GREAT.
newhannah, age 9 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? So the girl could be a girl again. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? It made the girl happy. newhannah's Comments: It was good.
newhannah, age 9
So the girl could be a girl again.
It made the girl happy.
newhannah's Comments:
It was good.
Seth, age 9 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? Beacause she wanted to help the mermaid. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? It made her feel happy because she knew that she had helped someone instead of being selfish. Seth's Comments: It was GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Beacause she wanted to help the mermaid.
It made her feel happy because she knew that she had helped someone instead of being selfish.
It was GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Emma, age 9 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? So she could be a girl again. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? With the queen happy again, she knew she would be a girl again. Emma's Comments: I loved it!
Emma, age 9
With the queen happy again, she knew she would be a girl again.
Emma's Comments:
I loved it!
, age How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? Because she wanted to be a human herself. 's Comments: I thought that the story had a moral that if you are wise you will listen to what pepole say.
Because she wanted to be a human herself.
I thought that the story had a moral that if you are wise you will listen to what pepole say.
Emily, age Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? Everyone would become human again. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? Good things happen when you're nice. Emily's Comments: GGGOOOOOODDD
Emily, age
Everyone would become human again.
Good things happen when you're nice.
Emily's Comments:
GGGOOOOOODDD
Daniel, age 9 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? So she could turn back into a girl again.
Daniel, age 9
Harrison, age 9 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? Because it was hard to get it back. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? She gets to be an mermaid. Harrison's Comments: I think it was great.
Harrison, age 9
Because it was hard to get it back.
She gets to be an mermaid.
Harrison's Comments:
I think it was great.
Josh, age 8 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? So she can be a girl again. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? She got married. Josh's Comments: It was exciting.
Josh, age 8
So she can be a girl again.
She got married.
Josh's Comments:
, age Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? Because she wanted to be a human again. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? Because she was so desperate to be human again & she would do anything.
Because she wanted to be a human again.
Because she was so desperate to be human again & she would do anything.
Long, age 9 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? She had tests. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? It made her unselfish. Long's Comments: It was very long and exciting.
Long, age 9
She had tests.
It made her unselfish.
Long's Comments:
It was very long and exciting.
Ryan, age 9 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? So that she and the queen could be human again. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? She thought it was fun to be a fish. Ryan's Comments: I think this story is very good!
Ryan, age 9
So that she and the queen could be human again.
She thought it was fun to be a fish.
Ryan's Comments:
I think this story is very good!
, age Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? Because she wants to be a human. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? Good.
Because she wants to be a human.
, age Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? At first she did not want to help. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? She was glad to help. 's Comments: That story was great.
At first she did not want to help.
She was glad to help.
That story was great.
, age Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? Because she wants to be a human. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? good 's Comments: Cool.
good
Cool.
brandon, age 8 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? She wanted to be a girl again. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? She learned to help out. brandon's Comments: It was neat, but it wasn't true.
brandon, age 8
She learned to help out.
brandon's Comments:
It was neat, but it wasn't true.
H.E, age 9 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? To be a person. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? Made her happy. H.E's Comments: It was good!
H.E, age 9
To be a person.
Made her happy.
H.E's Comments:
It was good!
, age Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? She did not like being a fish. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? She got to be a girl again. 's Comments: Cool.
She did not like being a fish.
She got to be a girl again.
whitney, age 9 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? To be a girl again. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? Made her be nice. whitney's Comments: It was good.
whitney, age 9
To be a girl again.
Made her be nice.
whitney's Comments:
Holly, age 9 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? So that she could be a human again. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? She knows that heping someone is fun. Holly's Comments: It was really good.
Holly, age 9
So that she could be a human again.
She knows that heping someone is fun.
Holly's Comments:
It was really good.
, age Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? Because the girl wanted to be a girl back.
Because the girl wanted to be a girl back.
Joyce, age 10 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? The giant wanted the stones and the stars in exchange for the crown. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? The queen agreed to let the girl marry the prince. Joyce's Comments: This book is exciting but it can be improved by elaborating it.
Joyce, age 10
The giant wanted the stones and the stars in exchange for the crown.
The queen agreed to let the girl marry the prince.
Joyce's Comments:
This book is exciting but it can be improved by elaborating it.
Jenna, age 24 Why did the girl go to such trouble to recover the queen's crown? She wanted to become a girl again. How did helping the queen change the girl's feelings? The girl spent her entire life at leisure and would do nothing to help her parents. Then, a hardship came when she was changed into a fish. She was so desperate to become human again, she'd have gone to the ends of the earth. Jenna's Comments: Excellent!
Jenna, age 24
The girl spent her entire life at leisure and would do nothing to help her parents. Then, a hardship came when she was changed into a fish. She was so desperate to become human again, she'd have gone to the ends of the earth.
Jenna's Comments:
Excellent!
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